1. What do you think is the genre for this film?
Romance 2. What do you think the target audience is? 8-16 year olds, mainly girls 3. What things do you think makes it look like a trailer (what things work)? E.g. sound, shot length, mise-en-scene Music, narrative, short clips, credits 4. What things do you think makes it not look like a trailer (what things don't work)? E.g. sound, shot length, mise-en-scene Its pretty long, some of the audio wasn't aligned with the clips as well 5. Specifically, do you think the sound worked well with the moving picture? Why? Yes, the narration cleared up any confusion and the music was good 6. Did you understand the narrative? Mostly 7. Did it give too much away? No 8. Did the text work? Yes 9. What parts grabbed your attention/ what parts were too dragged out? The scene in the field was a little too long 10. Any other general feedback for things that worked/ constructive criticism: -
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1. What do you think is the genre for this film?
Romance/ Tragedy 2. What do you think the target audience is? 16+ girls 3. What things do you think makes it look like a trailer (what things work)? E.g. sound, shot length, mise-en-scene Narration, locations 4. What things do you think makes it not look like a trailer (what things don't work)? E.g. sound, shot length, mise-en-scene The length/ too long 5. Specifically, do you think the sound worked well with the moving picture? Why? Yes but the screech hurt a bit lol 6. Did you understand the narrative? Yes 7. Did it give too much away? Yes 8. Did the text work? Yes 9. What parts grabbed your attention/ what parts were too dragged out? Childhood memories were amazing 10. Any other general feedback for things that worked/ constructive criticism: :) 1. What do you think is the genre for this film?
Romance 2. What do you think the target audience is? Girls 3. What things do you think makes it look like a trailer (what things work)? E.g. sound, shot length, mise-en-scene Narration/ short shots of locations/ range 4. What things do you think makes it not look like a trailer (what things don't work)? E.g. sound, shot length, mise-en-scene Length of the trailer 5. Specifically, do you think the sound worked well with the moving picture? Why? Yes 6. Did you understand the narrative? Kind of 7. Did it give too much away? Yes 8. Did the text work? Yes 9. What parts grabbed your attention/ what parts were too dragged out? The shots where it switches from childhood photos and car 10. Any other general feedback for things that worked/ constructive criticism: - 1. What do you think is the genre for this film?
Romance/ Tragedy 2. What do you think the target audience is? Young teenagers 3. What things do you think makes it look like a trailer (what things work)? E.g. sound, shot length, mise-en-scene Alot of cliff hangers, good 4. What things do you think makes it not look like a trailer (what things don't work)? E.g. sound, shot length, mise-en-scene Bit long 5. Specifically, do you think the sound worked well with the moving picture? Why? Yes 6. Did you understand the narrative? Not sure about half way through, when it focuses on the boy 7. Did it give too much away? No 8. Did the text work? Yes 9. What parts grabbed your attention/ what parts were too dragged out? - 10. Any other general feedback for things that worked/ constructive criticism: Confused about when it focused on him 1. What do you think is the genre for this film?
Romance/ Tragedy 2. What do you think the target audience is? Age 15 3. What things do you think makes it look like a trailer (what things work)? E.g. sound, shot length, mise-en-scene Voice-over, credits 4. What things do you think makes it not look like a trailer (what things don't work)? E.g. sound, shot length, mise-en-scene Told almost the whole story 5. Specifically, do you think the sound worked well with the moving picture? Why? Yes 6. Did you understand the narrative? Yes, but I don't understand the ending 7. Did it give too much away? - 8. Did the text work? Yes 9. What parts grabbed your attention/ what parts were too dragged out? - 10. Any other general feedback for things that worked/ constructive criticism: The speech voice-overs weren't in time 1. What do you think is the genre for this film?
Romance 2. What do you think the target audience is? teenage girls/ young adults 3. What things do you think makes it look like a trailer (what things work)? E.g. sound, shot length, mise-en-scene Short bits of the story, jumping from place to place, voice-over 4. What things do you think makes it not look like a trailer (what things don't work)? E.g. sound, shot length, mise-en-scene Too long 5. Specifically, do you think the sound worked well with the moving picture? Why? Yes, it fit the action 6. Did you understand the narrative? Mostly, reason for being in car is unclear 7. Did it give too much away? No 8. Did the text work? Yes 9. What parts grabbed your attention/ what parts were too dragged out? Beach clips 10. Any other general feedback for things that worked/ constructive criticism: Voice-overs were quite unclear 1. What do you think is the genre for this film?
Romantic 2. What do you think the target audience is? teenagers (girls) 3. What things do you think makes it look like a trailer (what things work)? E.g. sound, shot length, mise-en-scene Different scenes, flowing short clips of a scene 4. What things do you think makes it not look like a trailer (what things don't work)? E.g. sound, shot length, mise-en-scene Length of trailer 5. Specifically, do you think the sound worked well with the moving picture? Why? Yes, it all fit well 6. Did you understand the narrative? Yes, apart from suicide 7. Did it give too much away? No 8. Did the text work? Yes 9. What parts grabbed your attention/ what parts were too dragged out? The whole thing was dragged out 10. Any other general feedback for things that worked/ constructive criticism: Shorten it 1. What do you think is the genre for this film?
Romantic tragedy 2. What do you think the target audience is? teenagers 3. What things do you think makes it look like a trailer (what things work)? E.g. sound, shot length, mise-en-scene Short shot lengths, credits, cliff hanger 4. What things do you think makes it not look like a trailer (what things don't work)? E.g. sound, shot length, mise-en-scene Too long, confusing change of plot 5. Specifically, do you think the sound worked well with the moving picture? Why? Yes, as it was dramatic 6. Did you understand the narrative? Not sure about the change of plot 7. Did it give too much away? No 8. Did the text work? Yes 9. What parts grabbed your attention/ what parts were too dragged out? Their love story was quite long 10. Any other general feedback for things that worked/ constructive criticism: Shorten the trailer 1. What do you think is the genre for this film?
Romantic Drama 2. What do you think the target audience is? teenagers and above 3. What things do you think makes it look like a trailer (what things work)? E.g. sound, shot length, mise-en-scene Sound effects work well also good costumes and props 4. What things do you think makes it not look like a trailer (what things don't work)? E.g. sound, shot length, mise-en-scene Bit long 5. Specifically, do you think the sound worked well with the moving picture? Why? Yeah it did 6. Did you understand the narrative No 7. Did it give too much away? No 8. Did the text work? Yes 9. What parts grabbed your attention/ what parts were too dragged out? The love ad connection between the characters but some parts were dragged out which was confusing 10. Any other general feedback for things that worked/ constructive criticism: No 1. What do you think is the genre for this film?
Romantic 2. What do you think the target audience is? teenage girls 3. What things do you think makes it look like a trailer (what things work)? E.g. sound, shot length, mise-en-scene Needs to be shorter, bit cringy 4. What things do you think makes it not look like a trailer (what things don't work)? E.g. sound, shot length, mise-en-scene Changing in lighting, voice-over quality poor 5. Specifically, do you think the sound worked well with the moving picture? Why? The whistle thing was too loud 6. Did you understand the narrative? Partly 7. Did it give too much away? Yes 8. Did the text work? Not at the end 9. What parts grabbed your attention/ what parts were too dragged out? - 10. Any other general feedback for things that worked/ constructive criticism: Nope |
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