1. What do you think is the genre for this film?
Romance 2. What do you think the target audience is? teenagers (probably girls)/ 12-20 3. What things do you think makes it look like a trailer (what things work)? E.g. sound, shot length, mise-en-scene Good voice overs 4. What things do you think makes it not look like a trailer (what things don't work)? E.g. sound, shot length, mise-en-scene It was too long, it could be seen as a short film 5. Specifically, do you think the sound worked well with the moving picture? Why? A few scenes were obviously dubbed, so the voices were out of sync 6. Did you understand the narrative? Not really, I don't understand why he was depressed 7. Did it give too much away? Yes 8. Did the text work? Yes 9. What parts grabbed your attention/ what parts were too dragged out? A lot of shots were not needed 10. Any other general feedback for things that worked/ constructive criticism: The voice-overs were really low quality
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1. What do you think is the genre for this film?
Romance 2. What do you think the target audience is? teenage girls 3. What things do you think makes it look like a trailer (what things work)? E.g. sound, shot length, mise-en-scene The text that explains the story, short shot lengths, the music and the voiceovers 4. What things do you think makes it not look like a trailer (what things don't work)? E.g. sound, shot length, mise-en-scene It's too long, it shows too much of the story/ gives too much away 5. Specifically, do you think the sound worked well with the moving picture? Why? Yes, the voice-over of the characters talking whilst the audience sees them worked really well 6. Did you understand the narrative? Yes, but some parts like the end are a bit confusing 7. Did it give too much away? A bit in the end few shots 8. Did the text work? Yes especially on the beach 9. What parts grabbed your attention/ what parts were too dragged out? \the beginning is really good but the end is a bit long 10. Any other general feedback for things that worked/ constructive criticism: The suicide at the end gives away too much 1. What do you think is the genre for this film?
Romantic 2. What do you think the target audience is? teenage girls 3. What things do you think makes it look like a trailer (what things work)? E.g. sound, shot length, mise-en-scene Short shot lengths, text on screen 4. What things do you think makes it not look like a trailer (what things don't work)? E.g. sound, shot length, mise-en-scene Too long 5. Specifically, do you think the sound worked well with the moving picture? Why? Yes,, sound fit the mood and atmosphere 6. Did you understand the narrative? Yes 7. Did it give too much away? A bit 8. Did the text work? Yes 9. What parts grabbed your attention/ what parts were too dragged out? The beginning grabbed my attention 10. Any other general feedback for things that worked/ constructive criticism: Shorten the film-> cut out end bit as I didn't understand why he was depressed and it gives too much away 1. What do you think is the genre for this film?
Romantic 2. What do you think the target audience is? teen girls (12-25) 3. What things do you think makes it look like a trailer (what things work)? E.g. sound, shot length, mise-en-scene Short shot lengths Didn't tell the whole story- want more 4. What things do you think makes it not look like a trailer (what things don't work)? E.g. sound, shot length, mise-en-scene Too long? Maybe gives too much away 5. Specifically, do you think the sound worked well with the moving picture? Why? Yes-> sound to fit all scenes 6. Did you understand the narrative? Yes 7. Did it give too much away? A little bit- what else would be in the actual film? 8. Did the text work? Yes 9. What parts grabbed your attention/ what parts were too dragged out? When the boy died, it grabbed my attention 10. Any other general feedback for things that worked/ constructive criticism: Just might be too long and the story goes really quickly 1. What do you think is the genre for this film?
Romantic 2. What do you think the target audience is? teen girls (12-25) 3. What things do you think makes it look like a trailer (what things work)? E.g. sound, shot length, mise-en-scene Short shot lengths 4. What things do you think makes it not look like a trailer (what things don't work)? E.g. sound, shot length, mise-en-scene The length of the whole trailer was too long 5. Specifically, do you think the sound worked well with the moving picture? Why? Yes, romantic sound 6. Did you understand the narrative? Yes a bit 7. Did it give too much away? No 8. Did the text work? Yes 9. What parts grabbed your attention/ what parts were too dragged out? When the boy died 10. Any other general feedback for things that worked/ constructive criticism: Shorten the trailer |
Draft 1 questionnaireMy focus group watched my first draft of the trailer and completed a questionnaire giving constructive criticism for me to reflect on and improve my trailer ArchivesCategories |